You Took a Part of Me

by Alex
(Dallas)

Standing there in the dim light
You appeared and shook my might
looked right through me with those grassy eyes
No words to describe but it was love at first sight

I don't know what you felt
My heart just went into melt
I couldn't speak a word because you knew
What I would say, what I would do

Now your headed home
Eight hours into my unknown
Hope you look back at tonight and think of me
Because my dear you took a part of me





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Feb 26, 2012
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by: Anonymous

Could be a song if it was longer. Good Job

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